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Need help with your UCAS Personal Statement?

The personal statement is the single greatest opportunity to sell yourself to your future university. Through the Editing and Writing services our vastly experienced team can help ensure that your UCAS personal statement contains an optimal balance of your skills, experience and personal qualities that present you in the best possible light for the courses chosen by you.

Why do I need to use the Personal Statement Editing Service?

There are lots of different reasons why you might want to use one of our services, but the main one is that your UCAS application is a once in a lifetime opportunity; one that you need to get absolutely right first time. It is not surprising that many applicants are nervous about whether they can achieve this without a little help. In the current fiercely competitive admissions climate using our Editing and Advisory service gives you the reassurance that your personal statement maximises your potential and helps you stand out from the crowd.

Our Team

Our team is made entirely of experienced education professionals. With backgrounds in sixth form leadership and university admissions we have expertise from both sides of the application process. Together we have decades of experience in successfully advising young people on how to turn their dream university places into reality.

How Does the Fully Written Bespoke Personal Statement Service Work?

Place your order and make your payment through Paypal* (All major Debit/Credit cards accepted)
Complete our online questionnaire and upload your current personal details. When these are received the clock starts ticking.
Now our team gets to work. Your details will be allocated to one of our team. They will begin the process of writing your personal statement that will give you the best chance of success with your application.
We will return a fully written original personal statement to you within the specified deadline.
If we feel that we need some further information to make your statement as impressive as it can be then we will contact you urgently to ask for further information.
Further revisions. Since it is your personal statement you now have the opportunity to make further revisions to your statement and, you can return a revised statement to us for further cycles of editing. For each cycle we guarantee the same level of written feedback and response time.

How Does the Editing and Advisory Service Work?

Place your order and make your payment through Paypal* (All major Debit/Credit cards accepted)
Complete our online questionnaire and upload your current personal statement. When these are received the clock starts ticking.
Now our team gets to work. Your details will be allocated to one of our team. They will begin the process of editing your statement and producing a report on how well your personal statement suits your application.
The edited statement and report is returned to you within the specified deadline. With this you will get a written report on how effectively we feel that your statement supports your application and some recommendations on how it could be improved.
Further revisions. Since it is your personal statement you now have the opportunity to make further revisions to your statement and, if specified in your order, you can return a revised statement to us for further cycles of editing. For each cycle we guarantee the same level of written feedback and response time.
We know what needs to be in your statement

As soon as we get your details our hugely experience team starts to look at the admission requirements for your chosen courses. If at any stage we feel that there is any further information that we need in order to advise you about your application then we guarantee that we will contact you urgently. It is our mission that you submit a personal statement that effectively addresses all aspects required for the strongest possible application.

What do we mean by edit?

Each statement we work on will receive more than a basic copy editing service.

Yes, this will include:

Correcting spelling and grammar
Checking of punctuation and correct capitalisation
Rewording of poorly constructed sentences
Removal of unnecessary words and replacement with more concise phrases
Check paragraphs are used effectively and the statement reads well as a whole

But also more specific to the UCAS application process:

Whether your statement articulates how you satisfy the requirements of your chosen course
How best you should allocate the proportions of your statement for each requirement
Help you highlight any areas of particular strength
Help you turn potential weaknesses into strengths
Ensure that your statement stands out from the others that you are competing against
What will be in the report?

Each time we return an edited statement it will be accompanied by a report giving advice on:

What changes have been made and why.
The relative strengths and weaknesses of your statement.
How well we feel your statement meets the requirements of your chosen courses and universities.
Any suggestions on how to further improve the effectiveness of your personal statement.
Above all we wish you a successful and fulfilling future at the university of your dreams.

*The Personal Statement Editing Service is part of High Peak Adventure. All payments will show on Credit/Debit card statements as PAYPAL*PSES-ADVICE